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Old OC compilation

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This might be the final version, with cel-shading and everything. Please give me feedback on how to improve on the design.
From Left to right, top to bottom:
Faustus, Satin Fulham, Greg The Lion, Leah, Oda Yoshiro,
Radio Rabbit, Bruin and Davis Xion, Alvah, Kaaji Shiima, Tex A. Verry, Oda Chou.
Edit: Fell free to ask me about any of the characters here.
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I found your tumblr through some random search, and I saw this as the background. I was trying to figure out what Tex was, but I see you left a comment here that confirmed he's a dog. (Yay, I was right! Wink/Razz )

Anyway, I came out of lurking to say that I really like Tex, but I think he could be even more awesome if you tried tweaking him, maybe? Not sure how... I'm really not particularly good at distinctive character design, but I think he has the most immediate potential. I suppose it's the simplicity of his overall design, but he really stands out as the most interesting character in other images too. I wish I could offer some specific suggestions for what to play around with, but I'm not sure what to suggest, honestly. Sweating a little... 

Kaaji would be my second choice, along these lines. While he's definitely more distinctive, I feel some parts of his design don't harmonize as well as they could? Or at least, could be better served with a little more streamlining, or exaggeration? I like his general combination of sharp points and curved lines, but I don't know if it's currently the best flow amongst those shapes? I'm sorry, I really can't think how to express what I mean. Otherwise, he's an interesting dragon, and I like the color combinations.